Sunday, August 29, 2010

Until then ??

Eyes are wrong
unless it has an insight vision..
Until then call it blind.

Ears are wrong
unless it can listen to silence..
Until then call it deaf.

Words are wrong
unless it can soothe a soul...
Until then call it dumb.

Actions are wrong
unless it can actuate a torrent..
Until then call it writhe.

Thoughts are wrong
unless it is out of true vision..
Until then call it inane.

Instincts are wrong
unless it can go beyond interpretations..
Until then call it hunch.

Feelings are wrong
unless it has the scent of love..
Until then call it intentional.

4 comments:

  1. good work...
    thought provoking...
    keep writing dr!

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  2. Ears are wrong
    unless it can listen to silence.
    Until then call it deaf

    so true..

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  3. Both Geethu & satish: Thanks for encouraging.

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  4. So true of these lines! Great going!! keep writing!

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